Thank you for the comment, so the song is not so bad after all. But I want to improve it someday thought.
The part that is strange, I "may know" which one you're talking about. I guess that must be the part before the end when 2 frames repeat but the solo instrument doesn't use any echo anymore. This part doesn't comes out right yet to me. Or maybe I'm searching problems where there's not. I still want to know which part since I'm curious to see what people like or not.
The idea came out of nowhere and I wrote the notes in FT. There was the first part (from beginning), then the second part idea came out at the same time but doesn't fit much. I tried many "instruments" but if I do with echo and vibrato it sound even worse
Maybe I should try to learn more music and improve that skill someday then. I like music but... just it takes too much time when you cannot read music! I just press keyboards notes until I find the right sounds... Quite a long process.
Here's the version with changed pitch and a little bit faster
here. I like both version but have a thing for the faster once since it feel more action for a game somehow because of the speed. That's the feeling I get from hearing it. I don't know if I'm the only one to base comment on feelings..
